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Sunday 23 September 2012

"panchi"





        Hote hum panchi to gagan mai udd paate
Jaha chahta mann waha ki free mai sher kar paate
Baarish jab hoti tab apne ghoslo mai chup jaate
Roz savere savere daana hum khaate
                                                      Pani peen eke liye yaha waha chakkar lagate



Hote hum panchi to khus reh paate
Aur  mast hawa mai lehraate… 
Hote hum panchi to khule gagan mai udd paate… 





                                                                                                                



4 comments:

  1. nice thoughts presented with fresh natural feel... panchi jab hawa mein udte hai to akash ki sundarta mein chaar chaand laga dete hai... !!!keep writing..!!

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  2. ya smthng diff frm d sad quotes n pessimistic thots..
    thnx

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  3. Nidhi Di u made me feel jealous of birds..i to used to feel dey r dependent on us for daana etc...Bt this poem made me feel totally envy of them...

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    1. yes switie itz us whu r dependent 4 litle thngs on others..
      birds fly in open sky high n high... go places 4 food n water
      n feed their litle ones..
      bt dnt envy thm re.. :)

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