Hote hum
panchi to gagan mai udd paate
Jaha chahta mann waha ki free mai sher kar paate
Baarish jab hoti tab apne ghoslo mai chup jaate
Roz savere savere daana hum khaate
Pani peen eke liye yaha waha chakkar lagate
Hote hum panchi to khus reh paate
Aur mast
hawa mai lehraate…
Hote hum panchi to khule gagan mai udd paate…
nice thoughts presented with fresh natural feel... panchi jab hawa mein udte hai to akash ki sundarta mein chaar chaand laga dete hai... !!!keep writing..!!
ReplyDeleteya smthng diff frm d sad quotes n pessimistic thots..
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Nidhi Di u made me feel jealous of birds..i to used to feel dey r dependent on us for daana etc...Bt this poem made me feel totally envy of them...
ReplyDeleteyes switie itz us whu r dependent 4 litle thngs on others..
Deletebirds fly in open sky high n high... go places 4 food n water
n feed their litle ones..
bt dnt envy thm re.. :)